Saturday, April 01, 2006

A Poem, Tears- fall

Why do these tears fall?

Why thy let these tears fall

at all?

Haven't thee once heard the call?
Rejoiced before?

The celestial angels always come
They tear

As they descend from beyond the infinite sky
To take thee under their gentle wing
To relieve thee of sorrow
and joy
To lead thee the path of sanctity and redemption

Where the very marrow of thy soul
Dies.

'O Why do these tears fall?

The gentle breeze has bloweth forth
She whispers

A tale from stoic mother-nature herself
To caress thee with her light touches
To guide thee to the garden of serenity
of brown leaves
and sad blooms
To alleviate thee to hushed tranquillity

Where only solace in all its soothing harmony
Exists.

'O Why do these tears fall?

Into rosy sanguine seas
I steer.

The old seed of hope a secret of the ocean deep
To seek a mountain of sturdiness
To embark with thee,
Even on a journey of pain.

Where there exists
Only an unimpeachable island of absolute rhapsody

Why do these tears fall?

Into soil so rich
I bury them.

To leave.
To forget
The weeping lark of yester
day.

I was checking out blogs awhile ago when I came across an original composition.
He wrote it as an encouraging piece thoh, but,
somehow, I thot it wld be interesting to give it a melancholic twist.

It is interesting,
how words can be played about,
how the mood can be altered with re-paragraphing,
slight additions and omissions.

For original poem,
please refer to "Mr Interesting"s blog.

Yes, tt's the one on my link.

2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hmmm... I prefer the original. Piracy suckz! *laughs*

Okok, jus teasing u only... Keep updating ur blog k? This maybe the only way u fill me in with ur life..

*winkz*

2:01 AM  
Blogger fairy in a goldfish bowl said...

.....

I thot d original was too frivolous!!Haha~

well, we can always meet up for cheap good food!!!Or watch nice nice shows. I know x men 3 coming!!

12:17 AM  

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